I'm going to try and be as honest as possible. I LOVE the outfit that she's wearing. It looks amazing! All of the tiny details added to it make it even better. I also like the fact that all of the colors match, and nothing is randomly brighter than anything else. That makes it appealing to the eyes. One thing I think you could practice some more is the shadowing on the hair. It doesn't look too realistic. It kind of looks like you just took a solid brush and drew lines through the hair. I understand that hair is a VERY difficult thing to master, though, so you did a very nice job
This is still a LOT better than anything I could draw on a computer xD
Overall, I would give this about a 9.6/10
Sorry if I seemed a little harsh in some places, but it's just my opinion.
you werent harsh at all! thankies so much for critiquing my lovey ;w; im super glad u love her and i did try to match her colors up; and it worked out perfectly. her outfit and everything. hngh <3
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